Enrico Pietrobon in private message sais:
"Hi. you can look at my first job with GH4?
eeva.pro/it/video/28438"
Ok. Let's see:
- colors are awful!!! This is mini-dv-era colos... You should do CC more acurate. And I know, GH4 can do mach more with colors!
- image look very flat
- too dark in shadows and overexposed in highlights
- the shots are too long and boring: 5 seconds of lips without any action (00:24 - 00:30).. The guy cleans dirty shue (00:48).. etc...
- Do you know the rules of editing? You can't use two closups or midframes in a row
- and so on... music, directing...
And one and only one cool shot is 01:01 - drone and wind...
My conclusion is - there only one reason for 15 likes. Every one read your message and "Like".
So, guys! Have you even watched this video?! How can you like it? Wish I had "Dislike" button.
I recognize that caught my attention this feedback.
I've seen the video a few times. Calmly.
Certainly, I think the video deserves another hue. (Useful to remember that the calibration of monitors is very important).
The basic editing rules are this: basics.
Although anyone can make changes to its rules, effectively two consecutive midframes or two closups is not showy.
The times of the scenes are important. Too long shining shoes ....
As I mentioned before, anyone can have their own editing rules, and all our videos can be improved and edit each differently. If all this video editáramos again, is likely to arise thousand different versions, with different colors, interspersed planes, etc ... But his work is as respectable as anyone.
Anyway, in my humble opinion, I do not see this video worthy of "video of the day".
At the time I criticized "asking likes" .... and now not I said nothing more about it.
You've done one work, and I congratulate him for that. Surely it will have taken note of these ideas for future editions.
Kind regards.
The "dislike" button would be a danger ...
If you click "like" lightly, a button "dislike" would be even worse ....
Do not be angry, I speak with a little irony .. ;-)
A greeting.
The "dislike" button would be a danger ...
If you click "like" lightly, a button "dislike" would be even worse ....
Do not be angry, I speak with a little irony .. ;-)
A greeting.
I asked for advice on my video.
not to know whether or not my video and better than another.
You are better than me it seems ...
Well .. Congratulations
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